Sparky Prime wrote:JediTricks wrote:- Rey is a bit of a Mary Sue as well, she is automatically good at: repairing things, speaking astromech droid language, surviving in a harsh environment, piloting, interstellar travel, hyperdrive engineering, hand to hand fighting, pistol use, connecting to the Force, using the Force without one iota of training, and lightsaber combat; she's basically Lil Annie x3.
Automatically? Having grown up forced to make a living off of salvaging components from downed space ships, I'd think she spent the majority of her life developing the knowledge of what was worthy to save and fixing up parts to be able to sell them. Not to mention, she's probably been in several fights living on a planet with such scarce resources. Being a good pilot, we know seems to be somewhat of an innate ability Force-sensitives have, as both Anakin and Luke natural pilots before having formal training, but considering she told Finn she was a pilot already, that'd suggest she'd gotten some experience at some point.
Oh, I must have missed that part of the movie where it showed her building anything for any reason. All we saw her do was scavenge and clean junk, from what I can remember there wasn't anything fixed anywhere before the Falcon. Just because you're willing to write yourself a little story about why she is good at these things doesn't mean she's not a bit of a Mary Sue in the script, that script didn't do the heavy lifting to even justify those things in suggestion.
While it was the New Republic capital, I don't think it was Coruscant. At least, everything I've seen says it wasn't. But yeah, it did feel like they could have put more weight on that. They've effectively lost most of their fleet and government at that point.
The script said it has a name for the system, Hosnian Prime, the visual effects showed a planet which looked both from space and from ground like Coruscant, and was stated in the script to be the Republic capital rather than the "New Republic capital". It may not be Coruscant, but they didn't do enough to separate it in that brief little blip of a scene.
- Finn seems to have little compunction about killing so soon after being horrified by abject killing, these fellow troopers were the only people he knew and they were conscripts like him, he kills dozens of them in the first moments of his turn from the First Order.
To be fair, as I recall, he only started fighting once he saw Rey was in trouble.
I was actually referring to the very first scene in the TIE Fighter still in the hangar, he's blasting away at ground troops. If he had at least hesitated, showed consternation about having to be a killer after all but for a cause (just a brief inward gaze with a furrowed brow), I could have at least understood, but he seems perfectly content to shoot to kill as soon as he can.
This was a big problem I had with the film. We all know Luke lost that saber when Vader cut off his hand on Cloud City. So how did Maz even end up with it?
The movie originally was going to open with the same saber floating in space towards a planet (possibly still with Luke's hand), it's really dumb. "Someone found it and sold it" is my guess.
Kylo Ren's decision not to keep hunting for BB-8 calling off the First Order strike,
To be fair, he knew Rey had seen the map and expected to be able to get it from her. He had no reason to believe someone untrained in the Force would be able to resist him.
Fair to whom? It's a map of space, even if she had seen it, how could he know how accurate her memory would be to recreate said map all the way down to the very island Luke is exiled upon? They had the droid nearly in their clutches, there was no sense that they didn't have the resources to deal with this, beyond his ego's entirely incredulous reason for leaving, there was no justification for not grabbing the droid as well.
Finn knowing how to take down the shields of Starkiller base,
He didn't. Something he even told Han once they got to the Starkiller planet. He just wanted to get there to save Rey. That's why they captured Captain Phasma, they forced her to lower the shield for them.
He did know how to take down the shields insomuch as he knew to get Phasma to do it. I'm still incredulous on Phasma having that level of control over the entire planet's shields, yet Finn knew she'd have that ability.
- The Resistence fleet is pretty meager.
Supposedly the bulk of the Resistance Fleet was on the planets the Starkiller destroyed.
The Resistance isn't the Republic, they shouldn't be the same thing. Starkiller destroyed Hosnian Prime and its 4 or 5 moons, the seat of the Republic. The Resistance has what appears to be a handful of X-wings dealing with the Starkiller Base raid - even the Death Star 1 run was 30 ships.
- Kylo Ben calling out Finn as a traitor felt far-fetched, Finn was a conscript and a lowly stormtrooper, why would the First Order think twice about this guy at all, much less focus heavily on him when he's just another nameless number?
Well they did have that conversation about him not showing signs of non-conformity before. Having spent a lifetime being raised to act and think like any other Stormtrooper, only for him suddenly turn traitor on them, they'd probably want to know why in the event they'd need to check the conditioning of other Stormtroopers.
Perhaps, but I don't automatically go there in my mind because they have a procedure for this in effect, Phasma is matter-of-fact about the evaluation and reconditioning order she gave. Plus, they're kinda busy using this Starkiller weapon for the first time and trying to track down Luke Skywalker. I'm not saying you're wrong, just that it doesn't feel like a natural fit to me to focus at all on Finn at this point, he's more a curiosity at this point. In the next film it would be a solid fit once Finn made a name for himself with the Resistance with his actions at Starkiller base, but here it felt too soon to me.
So where is the exact number then, hrm? Again, sure Han says something about it taking more than 1000 ships with more firepower than he's ever seen to destroy a planet, but Han's not talking about the actual size of the fleet there, nor do we know if he'd know exactly how many ships the Empire has. Han was just guessing at what it might take because he's never seen an entire planet blown away before. So yeah, that's a presumption on your part, not actual evidence from the script as none of the films actually tells us the exact size of the Imperial Fleet.
HAN: The entire starfleet couldn't destroy the whole planet. It'd take a thousand ships with more fire power than I've...
The script is the authority in the matter, until you can find a source in the canon showing a better argument, this is the most definitive statement. The line is evidence, your supposition is not, and nothing you've countered with exists anywhere in canon or anywhere beyond your presumptions.
I wouldn't say Luke "tiptoed" into the Dark Side... Certainly he was tested and came very close by giving into his emotions to lash out at Vader, but when confronted with turning to the Dark Side, that moment where the Emperor tells him to kill Vader, Luke rejected it. And when does the prequels ever suggest Obi Wan was tempted by the Dark Side?
Luke uses the Force to strangle a pair of Gamorrean guards who have merely blocked his way. Luke threatens Jabba's life. Luke draws a blaster to his hand to shoot Jabba. Luke gives in to his fear when confronted with a threat against Leia and lashes out in fear and anger against Vader, savagely attacking until he disarmed the foe. Those are tiptoeing into the Dark Side.
Obi-Wan in the prequels gets angry when Qui-Gon is killed and uses that anger during his attack on Darth Maul. Obi-Wan gets emotionally attached to Qui-Gon and Anakin which leads to anger and fear. Obi-Wan is angry at Anakin towards the end of the Mustafar lightsaber battle. The movies don't intentionally say Obi-Wan is dipping his feet in the waters of the Dark Side, but they say that anger, fear, hate are direct paths to the Dark Side for a Jedi, and shows Obi-Wan with those traits.
Dom wrote:Moving our discussion about the toys from last months "hauls" thread to here.
This is not an appropriate venue for that conversation. I will split your post into a new topic.
Maz having Force powers would have been too much, had the prequels not happened I would have been ok with this, but now it's too late to just add random Force-adept non-Jedi who aren't with the Dark Side.
Why would a non-Jedi force sensitive have to be on the Dark Side? I always figured there would be a number of force sensitives who were untrained, and just going about their business. They might know. They might not. But, they are living quietely (maybe to avoid being conscripted by one side or the other).
Like I said, had it only been 3 movies before this it would have been fine, but in the canon, every single non-Jedi and non-Sith who uses the Force is cast as a villain, making it a strong precedent:
Asajj Ventress
Darth Maul perhaps (the theory being that Sidious' actual apprentice was Count Dooku and Maul was merely a trained assassin a la Ventress and didn't know he was always meant to be expendable, I dunno if I buy this but the timing of Darth Tyranus being the apprentice within the 10 years between TPM and AOTC)
The Nightsisters
The Inquisitors
Savage Opress
That's just how the movies and tv shows have written it, every non-trained Force user has been a baddie, it's tough to undo all that canon.
Not sure how this is problematic.
The First Order saw an opportunity, and exploited it. Regimes rise because they serve some interest. Somebody benefitted from the Empire. Similarly, somebody benefited from the First Order.
How is the Starkiller out of whack for "Star Wars"? It is a planet scale gun.
If the First Order can amass huge, ridiculously grand-scaled resources within a few years of the Empire's collapse and the destruction of the Death Star 1 and 2, the Inquisitor, and control over the organizations that created them, then it takes away the gravitas and threat of both the Empire and the First Order. If they can do it in 6 years, why doesn't everybody do it all the time? It's a massive undertaking, the clone army took a decade of creation and a lifetime of massing the plans to do so, the Death Star took 18 years, wresting control of the Republic took significant machinations. Yet the First Order just swoops in and does it again seemingly overnight? That's my problem.
The Death Star was a small moon-sized station. The Death Star II was a larger but still moon-sized station, and an incomplete one at that. If it took the considerable efforts of the Empire to make those, and they had to travel to their targets to destroy them, how does the First Order in a matter of years convert an entire planet to a gun that shoots through hyperspace and siphons entire stars with less resources and time? It's asking a lot, it's several scales of magnitude larger than the Death Star II and it does 2 things far more advanced than anything previously seen in Star Wars. How is that NOT out of whack to you?
- The political structure of the New Republic, Rebel Alliance, Resistance, the Senate, Empire, Old Republic, and First Order is muddled and confusing, and the scene cut from the film explaining more of it is very Prequel-esque.
Not really. Between the crawl and dialogue, it is spelled out pretty clearly.
It's not pretty clear, it's vague.
Given how aggressively Abrams cribbed from old drafts and sketchbooks, it is possible that Rey is Ren's brother (similar to the early draft of Episode 6 that had Luke going bad and being put down by Leia).
It is safe to assume that questions about Rey will be answered in the next two movies. (It is possible that Rey was left on Jakku by a hostile party. Maybe they were trying to make her go crazy? I dunno.)
Anything's possible, but in the here and now she's a bit of a Mary Sue.
- BB-8 is a Mary Sue.
- BB-8 doesn't get humanized very well because his/her voice isn't properly defined by Rey acting as C-3PO, and there aren't many noble or brave actions on 8's part.
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And, why does BB8 have to be heroic? He is a droid, arguably a piece of equipment more than a character.
There are IT guys who can understand beep codes and such. Rey, being a Scavenger could have picked up a few things.
Without heroism, who is BB-8? What is he defined by? Not bloody much. Droids are meant to be people in Star Wars, they were written specifically as a commentary on the slave underclass, ANH picks this fight clearly.
Who can understand a databurst? Show me one person IRL who can understand a hundred tones a second. She's not getting the gist of the feeling of BB-8's intentions, she's directly translating... and the only character to do so. She is his voice as much as 3PO is R2's voice in the OT and PT.
There have been plenty of air battles and trenchruns.
Poe's main purpose was to be a more heroic counter-point to Finn. As Finn became more heroic, there was less reason to focus on Poe.
(Initially, Finn is trying to get away. He is not a bad guy, but he wants nothing to do with the First Order. In face, he only saved Poe because he needed somebody to drive the getaway car.)
Then what's the point of having them defeat the Starkiller Base in this movie at all if it's all about Rey, Finn, Han, and Kylo Ren? Because they needed an ANH ending to hang their actual ESB-style ending off of (Han is dead, Finn is in a coma, the First Order is still powerful and knows where the Resistance base is, it's not a particularly happy ending when all is said and done). There's no weight to the Starkiller base battle to the point that there's no reason for it at all in this film, and they should have found another victory to hang Rey and Finn's story upon.
- Major coincidences: Max von Sydow's throwaway character is in the exact same relative area as Rey, BB-8 has the entire planet from which to choose and finds Rey, Finn and Poe have the entire planet from which to crash and finds one closest to Rey and BB-8, the heroes are all in the same vicinity as the long-lost Millennium Falcon, Han finally tracks down the Falcon just as the heroes use it, Han's detour to Maz's castle just happens to be where Luke's lightsaber calls to Rey, Kylo Ren's decision not to keep hunting for BB-8 calling off the First Order strike, Finn knowing how to take down the shields of Starkiller base, Kylo Ren being in the same place as Han and company, Poe's X-wing success flying through the crack where nobody else could.
This is either a question of scale (a smaller area makes it easier for everybody to be in the same place) or contrivance.
But, Han bringing Rey to Maz was likely intentional, possibly because Han knew the lightsaber was in Maz's building. (I am expecting more on this in the next movie or two.)
BB-8 travels for a long time to get to where Rey is, so it's not something you can chalk up to scale, it IS a contrivance.
You can't ascribe motives to Han bringing Rey to Maz based on a story you haven't seen yet, there simply aren't enough suggestions in THIS movie to justify that leap of faith. And that's what you're doing, making a leap of faith. It doesn't change the fact that in this film it's a story issue.
It's in the final shooting script that Han is taking them to Maz because Maz can get BB-8 to the Resistance, a previous draft (actually, the shooting script but before the scenes were cut and reshot) had Maz taking them to the Resistance and giving Leia the lightsaber. Once there was no reason to have Maz in the story afterwards, that was reshot to have Rey find the saber by the Force.
Different types of killing. Killing in combat, especially killing armed adversaries, is different from a mass execution of non-combatants.
At this point, they don't know he's a traitor and haven't fired at him or looked askew at him. His issue is the brutality of the First Order, he is a lowly conscript, yet what happens? He brutally fires upon lowly conscripts. Yes, there's a difference; but the story doesn't present that difference well enough at this stage for this character given his motivations.
Ren is supposed to be an angsty twerp who was lucky enough to be in a good job.
Yet he's shown as very competent to the point of excelling with the Force in early scenes.
"BB-8" does not abbreviate well. I doubt it was a Poochie-push.
Nobody has a 3-syllable nickname for shorthand, "8" would have been fine. Han calls him "ball" once. It's not a great name, maybe not the worst name either, but man did I get sick of hearing it. And if it's not a Poochie push, it sure is a damned coincidence that this do-little character is the speartip of the TFA merchandising campaign.
But, there was nothing critical. I have not read any tie-in novels or comics. I came in "cold" with Episode 7, and did not need to go looking for anything.
Says there's nothing critical from previous tales, cites potential previous tales as motivation in same post.
Luke's Jedi academy being brought to its knees by Ben Solo, Rey's past, Leia's creation of the Resistance, the rise of Snoke and the First order, these are all elements. I have no problem with them being untold at this point, but it's bullshit to claim this is the very next story that had to be told after ROTJ; this is ANH mk 2.
The Death Star had no visible means of propulsion. Your point? Clearly, the Starkiller could move.
The Death Star is seen moving from place to place, it's a fucking story element. The Starkiller base is not clearly shown moving, it drains some of a star and fires through hyperspace, then it drains a star to death and is about to fire on another system, but are those stars the same star? Movie doesn't feel like telling you. Moving an entire planet is a big fucking question mark compared to moving a moon, doubly so when the planet wasn't constructed around a weapon and a hyperdrive the way the Death Star was. And let's not ignore that people are on the SURFACE of the planet when it might be moving at lightspeed. Shit, now I'm so unsure I have to read the script... ok, so it doesn't state in the script whether it moves or not, it leaves it unsaid, just that it drains stars plural. Lucasfilm canon-keeper Pablo Hidalgo confirms via his twitter that it's mobile, and the novel confirms that, but the movie itself doesn't convey it well if at all.
The point is that Han was making a comment about how difficult it would be to destroy a planet. He clearly did not expect the Empire to have the capacity to do so.
The point is that Han's comment uses the metric of "the [Empire's] entire starfleet" as that measure of impossibility and then uses a second metric for comparison against that being "a thousand starships with more firepower". Our discussion has nothing to do with the Empire's capacity to do so using other methods, only the size of their navy, and Han's line comments on it.
Luke and the others succeeded in stopping the Empire. They killed the Emperor, destroyed the second Death Star and killed many Imperials. Assuming that new enemies appear does not undo that.
Only now they didn't stop the Empire, now apparently the left the door open for the First Order to rise from the ashes of the Empire. That's not a victory, that's snatching defeat from the jaws of victory.
There was a cut scene.
I am assuming there will be an answer in the next movie.
The cut scene didn't say either, just showed the saber falling to a planet.